Model Organization: Personal Essay

Model Organization: Personal Essay

Introduction:

The winter sun was shining over the steep Colorado mountains. The air was crisp and the cool breeze gently touched my cheeks. I pulled my fur coat tightly around my body, fastened my ski goggles and listened for the sound of the starting gun.

Body:

Details of the Skiing Competition

Conclusion:

From this experience, I learned that no matter how hard something is, you should never give up. If I had given in to my tired muscles and the freezing temperatures on that eventful day, I would never have won the competition. But because I kept going despite the many obstacles in my way, I was able to bring home that shiny, first-place trophy.